Early in my recruiting career, I filled most of my roles without ever posting a job ad. I took the brief from the hiring manager, opened LinkedIn, typed in a job title and a few skills, and went looking.

Some profiles surfaced in my results again and again, for role after role. Other people, people I knew from the industry to be excellent, never appeared at all. The gap between those two groups came down to how the profile was built, far more than the talent behind it.

After 12+ years on the hiring side and more than 30,000 clients at MyStar Resumes, I can tell you a LinkedIn profile has exactly two jobs. It gets you found, and then it convinces the person who found you to send a message. This guide walks through every section of your profile with both jobs in mind.

The short answer

Recruiters find candidates through keyword search, so the strongest LinkedIn profile tip I can give you is to build every section around the words a recruiter would type. Put the job title you want and your core skills in your headline, your About section, your experience entries, and your skills list. Then make the human layer, meaning your photo, your achievements, and your recommendations, persuasive enough that the click turns into an approach.

That is the whole game in two sentences. The rest of this guide takes each section in the order a recruiter meets it.

Understand the search before you touch the profile

Everything on this page flows from one fact. Recruiters do not browse LinkedIn hoping to stumble across you. We search it, using a job title and a handful of skills, then work through the results the way you work through search results anywhere. Candidates who use the words we type appear, and candidates who describe themselves creatively do not, however capable they are.

I have written a full breakdown of the mechanics in how recruiters really search LinkedIn, and how to surface in the results, and it is worth reading alongside this guide. For now, hold onto the core discipline. Before you edit a single section, write down the exact job title you want next and the five to eight skills that appear over and over in job postings for it. Those words are your raw material for everything below.

The headline, your most valuable line

Your headline travels everywhere your name does. It shows in search results, on your posts, on your comments, and in the “people also viewed” panel. On the results page it is the only line of text competing for the recruiter’s click, which makes it the highest-value real estate on your entire profile.

The pattern that earns the click is simple. Searchable job title, then specialty, then one piece of proof or value, separated by plain dividers.

> Payroll Manager | UK and EMEA Payroll | Led payroll through two system migrations

Front-load it, because the first words survive truncation on a phone screen. Resist job-seeker phrases like “Seeking new opportunities”, which spend precious characters telling recruiters something a settings toggle already tells them. I have collected full patterns for different situations, including career changers and recent graduates, in LinkedIn headline examples that get recruiters clicking.

The photo and the banner

Recruiters see your photo at the same moment as your headline, and an empty gray circle reads as an abandoned profile. You do not need a studio shoot. You need a recent photo of your face, taken in good light, against a reasonably plain background, where you are looking at the camera and dressed the way you would for a normal day in your target role. Ask someone to take it on a phone by a window and you are most of the way there.

The banner is the wide image behind your photo, and most people leave it as the default blue texture. Treat it as free billboard space instead. A clean image related to your field, a simple graphic with your specialty in a few words, or even a well-chosen solid color all signal that someone lives here and takes the profile seriously. Keep any text away from the bottom left corner, where your photo overlaps it.

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The About section, written for the skim

Your About section is where the recruiter who clicked decides whether to keep reading. Only the first few lines show before the “see more” link, so open with the sentence that matters most. Who you are professionally, what you are strongest at, and the kind of problem you solve.

From there, write a short first-person story rather than a list of adjectives. Cover what you do, the proof that you do it well, and the direction you are heading, in plain language a recruiter can scan in under a minute. Work your target title and core skills in naturally, because this section is indexed by search just like your headline. I have a full structure with worked examples in my guide to the LinkedIn About section.

Experience entries that read like achievements

Most experience sections on LinkedIn are either empty job titles or pasted duty lists. Both waste the section’s power. Each entry needs two things, a searchable title line and a handful of achievement statements underneath.

The title line matters more than people realize, because job titles in your experience section carry real weight in search. If your official title was internal jargon like “Customer Excellence Partner 2”, use the recognizable market equivalent alongside it, such as “Customer Success Manager”.

Underneath, write three to five short statements that show results rather than responsibilities, the same discipline I teach for a resume or CV that gets interviews. The difference reads like this.

> Responsible for supplier management and cost control.

versus

> Renegotiated contracts across a supplier base of 40, cutting materials cost while holding delivery times through a difficult supply year.

The second version gives the recruiter a reason to message you. Numbers help wherever you can honestly include them, and where you cannot, scope words like “across three markets” or “for a team of twelve” do similar work.

The skills list is a search filter, treat it like one

Here is my rule for the skills section. It exists for the discrete terms recruiters filter on, so fill it with the exact, literal terms from the job postings you want, rather than personality words. “Financial Modeling”, “Salesforce”, “Demand Planning”, “Stakeholder Management” belong there. “Hard-working” and “Passionate” do not, because no recruiter has ever typed those into a search box.

Go through three or four job postings for your target role, list every named skill, tool, and method, and make sure each one you genuinely have appears in your skills section. Then pin the three most important to the top, because those display on your profile without a click. This is one of the fastest wins on the whole platform, and most candidates never do it.

Recommendations and activity, a light touch

Recommendations work like references a recruiter can read before ever contacting you. You do not need twenty. Two or three recent ones from managers or close colleagues, mentioning specific work, carry real weight. The reliable way to get them is to write one for someone else first, then ask directly with a gentle steer, such as “would you mention the launch we delivered together”.

Activity matters less than the influencer industry suggests. Nothing on the hiring side requires you to post daily thoughts. A recruiter checking your activity simply wants a sign of life, so commenting thoughtfully on posts in your field once or twice a week is plenty. An active-looking profile reassures. A silent one costs you far less than a weak headline does.

The settings that decide whether any of it works

Three settings control your visibility behind the scenes, and they take five minutes to check.

First, Open to Work. You can switch it on for recruiters only, a discreet flag in recruiter search, or add the green banner that everyone sees. Each choice suits a different situation, and I have covered the trade-offs in my guide to the Open to Work banner.

Second, your location. Recruiters filter by location on nearly every search, so set yours to the city or region where you want to work, and update it if you are relocating.

Third, your public profile visibility. Make sure your profile is viewable to people outside your network, because a recruiter who cannot see past your name will simply move to the next result. While you are there, edit your profile URL to a clean version of your name, which looks sharper on a resume or CV.

Bring it together

A LinkedIn profile rewards you differently from a job application. An application gets one reading, while your profile works every night and weekend, surfacing in searches you never see. Build the searchable layer with the right title and skills, build the persuasive layer with achievements and proof, check the three settings, and you have a profile that brings opportunities to you instead of the other way round.

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I’m Claire Lawrence. I spent more than 12 years as an international recruiter, and since 2013 I’ve helped over 30,000 clients get noticed and get hired.

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